Writing

Andy Griffith’s story

We started off by reading in the shower with Andy, and then we made a plan of an adventure story at home. Then we wrote a rough copy of the story using the plan and then we wrote it up in word. My story line is about three boys who go lawn mower racing around the house. Here it is! My portal story

We wrote a portal story at the start of the year and we also did it this term to see how far we have come from then. Its fun to write stories when we’re doing a test because it’s easier then doing sums and stuff likes that. But it’s also hard to edit a long story (not this one).we had to write a plan before we started. Here it is!

And he’s the story

Hand writing

At the start of the year I sucked at hand writing but I’ve got a little better then the start of this year. My editing has got better and my story writing has too. My punctuation has been better to. Also we have done letter writing and that’s better and easier than other stuff. Here’s some other stuff that I’ve wrote.

Plan planing is the start of a good story the more detailed the better the story. Planing is the easiest part for me. The plan man is the thing that we use, The skeleton is the bit like bob went shopping or somthing like that.